The Bus Stop Drafts

My story is about how it's wrong to stereotype people by their looks, and also it's not so bad to get to know someone who is different to you.

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Here are the drafts for my script so far. I got about 3 different version. After my seminar on friday with Jools said he really like the script, but I have to much talking in to it. Plus I made the characters become friend instatly, so I had to make it so they kind of know eachother from college but never really meet. So I change the script alot to suit this.